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Quote from B on May 19, 2023, 5:07 pm
- in a situation where talking and meeting to new people is both normal and expected. [talking to and meeting]
- in even with more men than women, [events]
- Approach the women you’re most interested in, eep it social [keep]
- in a situation where talking and meeting to new people is both normal and expected. [talking to and meeting]
- in even with more men than women, [events]
- Approach the women you’re most interested in, eep it social [keep]
Quote from B on May 19, 2023, 5:12 pm
- You’re already friends on social media [friends with]
- albeit that can happen to [too]
- My first “serious”, girlfriend [“,” between adjective and name]
- having a good time and having goo status [good]
- But you don’t have that in social circles. [that possibility]
- The problem with small social circles is that it gives you [they give you]
- “turkey” is a TPM terminology small-time value takers [terminology for]
- You’re already friends on social media [friends with]
- albeit that can happen to [too]
- My first “serious”, girlfriend [“,” between adjective and name]
- having a good time and having goo status [good]
- But you don’t have that in social circles. [that possibility]
- The problem with small social circles is that it gives you [they give you]
- “turkey” is a TPM terminology small-time value takers [terminology for]
Quote from B on May 19, 2023, 5:20 pm
- You you can swipe and reply [you]
- some dating apps algorythm give you a “score” [algorithms]
- Test several different profile [profiles]
- Pick 3 of your best picture [pictures]
- Communicate high value and pickyness in your description [pickiness]
- use syllogism for sex [syllogisms]
- if you’re for making make great memories [making]
- You you can swipe and reply [you]
- some dating apps algorythm give you a “score” [algorithms]
- Test several different profile [profiles]
- Pick 3 of your best picture [pictures]
- Communicate high value and pickyness in your description [pickiness]
- use syllogism for sex [syllogisms]
- if you’re for making make great memories [making]
Quote from B on May 19, 2023, 5:27 pm
- Over-use of social media tend to make people less happy [tends]
- Top profile can do better than in real life: top profile with large followers base and great pictures can line date[profiles, profiles, dates]
- If you’re still working your way up, you’d say something “chef in the making, [something like]
- Over-use of social media tend to make people less happy [tends]
- Top profile can do better than in real life: top profile with large followers base and great pictures can line date[profiles, profiles, dates]
- If you’re still working your way up, you’d say something “chef in the making, [something like]
Quote from B on May 19, 2023, 5:28 pm
- And start with the one you have either neglected the most. [you have neglected]
- And start with the one you have either neglected the most. [you have neglected]
Quote from B on May 19, 2023, 5:35 pm
- Talk to whole groups when you first entera group [enter a]
- From there on, it’s all about finding people you vibe with, [missing end of sentence]
- All you gotta is post a message [gotta do]
- Improve comedy for example [Improv]
- And don’t sweat it too much since this becomes natural once you become a high-quality man yourself [missing ending “.”]
- Once you have a cool group, that group shouldn’t for just about anyone. [shouldn’t be]
- Fo course [Of]
- For example, A social circle [a]
- Add women it didn’t work with your circle [with in your]
- For example, you can talk or thing at attractive women in your life [hint]
- We mark this as “pro-level” because: [because it]
- make yourself into someone who has have value to give [has]
- Movie / series producers [producer]
- Talk to whole groups when you first entera group [enter a]
- From there on, it’s all about finding people you vibe with, [missing end of sentence]
- All you gotta is post a message [gotta do]
- Improve comedy for example [Improv]
- And don’t sweat it too much since this becomes natural once you become a high-quality man yourself [missing ending “.”]
- Once you have a cool group, that group shouldn’t for just about anyone. [shouldn’t be]
- Fo course [Of]
- For example, A social circle [a]
- Add women it didn’t work with your circle [with in your]
- For example, you can talk or thing at attractive women in your life [hint]
- We mark this as “pro-level” because: [because it]
- make yourself into someone who has have value to give [has]
- Movie / series producers [producer]
Quote from B on May 27, 2023, 11:45 pmHi Lucio,
not a comment but a compliment:
in this lesson :
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/seduction-university/lessons/texting/topic/tips-techniques/
The tips on (I) empathizing via text and on (ii) commenting on her events being important, are soooooo awesome that IMO they are worth the price of SU by themselves!
Had I known these at the time, it would have made a big difference.
Hi Lucio,
not a comment but a compliment:
in this lesson :
The tips on (I) empathizing via text and on (ii) commenting on her events being important, are soooooo awesome that IMO they are worth the price of SU by themselves!
Had I known these at the time, it would have made a big difference.
Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on May 28, 2023, 3:55 amBOOOOM!
Thank you so much, Bel!
Both for the nice words, and for the huge value for improving the lessons (the previous batch slipped through the cracks for some weeks, but fixed them now).
BOOOOM!
Thank you so much, Bel!
Both for the nice words, and for the huge value for improving the lessons (the previous batch slipped through the cracks for some weeks, but fixed them now).
Quote from B on June 6, 2023, 6:09 pm
- if they’re looking or if they enjoy sex [looking for]
- Same goes for women more hang-ups about sex. [women with more]
- The fourth image on the page shows the words “He investes” instead of “He invests”
- Be the first date, or the very first day you say “hi”. [Be it on]
- if they’re looking or if they enjoy sex [looking for]
- Same goes for women more hang-ups about sex. [women with more]
- The fourth image on the page shows the words “He investes” instead of “He invests”
- Be the first date, or the very first day you say “hi”. [Be it on]
