Typos, Grammar, Syntax, & Content Improvement - Megathread

Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on February 1, 2023, 4:07 pm

BOOM!

Thank you so much, Bel!

Fixed it now.

Quote from Bel on February 2, 2023, 1:00 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/topic/power-negotiation-authority-example/:

1. Jess Nippard [Jeff]
2. Stephen is the expert [Stephan]
3. higher warm [warmth]
4. Jeff is higher warmth because: [because he:]
5. Stephan largely refuse [refuses]

Quote from Bel on February 2, 2023, 1:17 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/:

1. direct and explicity [explicit]
2. To act and on those power moves [act on]
3. train that social intelligence muscles [those]
4. articles and lessons on covert power moves first published [were first published]

Quote from Bel on February 2, 2023, 2:00 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-power-moves-101-how-to-handle-them/:

1. It’s rarely a matter of business [busyness]
2. every single “I’m sorry” are power moves [is a power move]
3. Those appropriate “sorry” [Those are]
4. “I’m considering whether to accept that apology :). [apology :)".]
5. yells at people when they get angry [yell]

Quote from Bel on February 2, 2023, 2:41 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-power-moves-101-examples-case-studies/:

1. you don’t even the “no need for sorry” [even need the]
2. a disempowering “I’m sorry” that, power-protect
3. whenever your “I’m sorry” can feel like a power mover, [move]
4. And notice yet another genius coming [genius move]

Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on February 3, 2023, 10:28 am

BOOM!

Thank you so much, Bel!

Fixed it now.

Quote from Bel on February 13, 2023, 6:38 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-frames/:

1. Him: How could you do such a terrible, terrible mean thing to me
   Her: Honey, ... [Him and Her are inverted]
2. So you often want to think of “what it means at the higher level”, where it makes the most different. [difference]

Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on February 14, 2023, 6:18 am

BOOM!

Thank you Bel, fixed it now.

Quote from Ali Scarlett on February 15, 2023, 2:57 pm

On Lucio's recent post:

On the notes in yellow:

• "4am" → "4 am"
• "Willing" → "Willink"
• "a F" → "an 'F'"
• "to much shorter term" → "to be much shorter-term"

As far as the notes in green:

• "you John mentioned" → "you, John, mentioned"
• "If instead one" → "If, instead, one"

However, they're in green because I'll be leaving them alone. I think punctuation can be a great tool for communicating the tone of a message and I'd prefer to focus on clear errors without touching Lucio's tone of (writing) voice.