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Thank you so much, Bel!
Fixed it now.
BOOM!
Thank you so much, Bel!
Fixed it now.
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B on February 2, 2023, 1:00 pm
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/topic/power-negotiation-authority-example/:
- Jess Nippard [Jeff]
- Stephen is the expert [Stephan]
- higher warm [warmth]
- Jeff is higher warmth because: [because he:]
- Stephan largely refuse [refuses]
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/topic/power-negotiation-authority-example/:
- Jess Nippard [Jeff]
- Stephen is the expert [Stephan]
- higher warm [warmth]
- Jeff is higher warmth because: [because he:]
- Stephan largely refuse [refuses]
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B on February 2, 2023, 1:17 pm
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/:
- direct and explicity [explicit]
- To act and on those power moves [act on]
- train that social intelligence muscles [those]
- articles and lessons on covert power moves first published [were first published]
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/:
- direct and explicity [explicit]
- To act and on those power moves [act on]
- train that social intelligence muscles [those]
- articles and lessons on covert power moves first published [were first published]
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B on February 2, 2023, 2:00 pm
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-power-moves-101-how-to-handle-them/:
- It’s rarely a matter of business [busyness]
- every single “I’m sorry” are power moves [is a power move]
- Those appropriate “sorry” [Those are]
- “I’m considering whether to accept that apology :). [apology :)".]
- yells at people when they get angry [yell]
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-power-moves-101-how-to-handle-them/:
- It’s rarely a matter of business [busyness]
- every single “I’m sorry” are power moves [is a power move]
- Those appropriate “sorry” [Those are]
- “I’m considering whether to accept that apology :). [apology :)".]
- yells at people when they get angry [yell]
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B on February 2, 2023, 2:41 pm
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-power-moves-101-examples-case-studies/:
- you don’t even the “no need for sorry” [even need the]
- a disempowering “I’m sorry” that, power-protect
- whenever your “I’m sorry” can feel like a power mover, [move]
- And notice yet another genius coming [genius move]
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-power-moves-101-examples-case-studies/:
- you don’t even the “no need for sorry” [even need the]
- a disempowering “I’m sorry” that, power-protect
- whenever your “I’m sorry” can feel like a power mover, [move]
- And notice yet another genius coming [genius move]
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BOOM!
Thank you so much, Bel!
Fixed it now.
BOOM!
Thank you so much, Bel!
Fixed it now.
B has reacted to this post.
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B on February 13, 2023, 6:38 pm
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-frames/:
- Him: How could you do such a terrible, terrible mean thing to me
Her: Honey, ... [Him and Her are inverted] - So you often want to think of “what it means at the higher level”, where it makes the most different. [difference]
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/covert-power-moves/topic/covert-frames/:
- Him: How could you do such a terrible, terrible mean thing to me
Her: Honey, ... [Him and Her are inverted] - So you often want to think of “what it means at the higher level”, where it makes the most different. [difference]
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BOOM!
Thank you Bel, fixed it now.
BOOM!
Thank you Bel, fixed it now.
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On Lucio's recent post:
On the notes in yellow:
- "4am" → "4 am"
- "Willing" → "Willink"
- "a F" → "an 'F'"
- "to much shorter term" → "to be much shorter-term"
As far as the notes in green:
- "you John mentioned" → "you, John, mentioned"
- "If instead one" → "If, instead, one"
However, they're in green because I'll be leaving them alone. I think punctuation can be a great tool for communicating the tone of a message and I'd prefer to focus on clear errors without touching Lucio's tone of (writing) voice.
On Lucio's recent post:
On the notes in yellow:
- "4am" → "4 am"
- "Willing" → "Willink"
- "a F" → "an 'F'"
- "to much shorter term" → "to be much shorter-term"
As far as the notes in green:
- "you John mentioned" → "you, John, mentioned"
- "If instead one" → "If, instead, one"
However, they're in green because I'll be leaving them alone. I think punctuation can be a great tool for communicating the tone of a message and I'd prefer to focus on clear errors without touching Lucio's tone of (writing) voice.
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Thank you for this, Ali!
In general, I consider lessons and articles to be a higher priority for "correctness" and "polishing", and the forum a bit more "fast communication" and "meaning first".
In the sense of "as long as the receiver understands and it's not too bad, then it's OK".
Thank you for this, Ali!
In general, I consider lessons and articles to be a higher priority for "correctness" and "polishing", and the forum a bit more "fast communication" and "meaning first".
In the sense of "as long as the receiver understands and it's not too bad, then it's OK".
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