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Quote from Bel on January 28, 2023, 12:50 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/examples-case-studies/topic/crooked-case-studies/:

1. two paragraphs 4.4;
2. “sorry, but it what you did wasn’t cool” [what]
3. We were supposed to write a movie we particularly liked. [write about a movie]
4. No the type of person who gets my respect. [not]

Quote from Bel on January 28, 2023, 12:54 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/examples-case-studies/topic/optional-case-study-the-rise-of-mafia-the-dark-side-of-effective-cooperation/:

1. Collaboration, Phase 1: “The Family” ["I", in line with other paragraphs]
2. Tightly-knight group [knit]
3. Values & rule to uphold  [rules]
4. And with that move, he sent provided proof [provided]
5. enforcing it, when he had to the power [had the]
6.  betrayal is bound to part of “the life”. [to be part]
7.  organization that was well-connected and willingly to [willing]

Quote from Bel on January 28, 2023, 12:58 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/examples-case-studies/topic/optional-game-theory-for-real-world-thriving/:

1. there is are two equally big issue [are, issues]
2. instead of keep on fighting and hating [keeping]
3. Sometimes the downside of “being wrong” and give [giving]
4. fuming against his landlord [her]
5. can’t avoid thewar [the war]
6. the all-out war destroys you, or consume [consumes]

Quote from Bel on January 28, 2023, 1:00 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/:

1. In the previous module we mention that [mentioned]
2. We called that “keeping track” now properly define “power accounting”: [We called that “keeping track”, now properly defined “power accounting”]

Quote from Bel on January 28, 2023, 1:10 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/topic/principles-of-interpersonal-power-dynamics/:

1. how most people behave towads you [towards]
2. some will almost never take from you while others will almost try to take. [try to always take]
3. Everyone’s behavior depends on you, and almost everyone’s attitude, approach, and behavior depend in large part on you. [Everyone’s behavior depends on you: almost everyone’s attitude, approach, and behavior depend in large part on you.]
4. in your pocket halfway our [out]
5. the opportunity will arise many people’s interests. [arouse]
6. Of course, there the very extreme possibilities [there are the]
7. teach some people close to you to become a better person [better people]
8. To Pur You Lower & Lower [Pull]
9. Cut 5, you arrive at the restaurants [restaurant]
10. Patterns of Power Cristallyze ... Self-Fulfilling Propchety [Crystallize, Prophecy]
11. that “informal power hierarchy” tend to turn official [tends]
12. de-crystallize a bad power restructure [structure]
13. For example: why, and you call those “friends”? How do you even meet those people…” ["why]
14. tell you in front of others that “sorry for his delayed answer but he was busy” ["sorry for my delayed answer but I was busy"]
15. And while he main gain some power, [they]
16. power to make for the imbalance. [make up for]

Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on January 29, 2023, 10:49 am

BOOOOM!

Thank you so much, Bel!

Fixed them all now.

Quote from Bel on January 31, 2023, 7:24 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/topic/assessing-power-moves-the-traffic-light-system/:

1. At the other end of the spetrum [spectrum]
2. Categorize and analyize [analyze]
3. But if he’s power-protecting others but not of you [not you]
4. That way I can finish this task for the client” [final ” to be removed]
5. (provides a rationale why he needs that document, and it’s a rationale that the boss is also likely to want and approve of”). [final ” to be removed]
6. the higher status your are compared to [you]
7. you’re in a foreign country where nobody knows, [knows you]
8. In the lesson on leadership, we show how Putin aggressively taking action [show]
9. needing the validation of hunchmen [henchmen]
10. if they shake give you a hand-crushing handshake [they]
11. only do so in a perfunctory, quick and neutral fashion” [final ” to be removed]

Quote from Bel on January 31, 2023, 7:28 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/topic/power-negotiation-101-self-defense-and-power-protecting/:

1. That way I can finish this task for the client” [final ” to be removed]

Quote from Bel on January 31, 2023, 7:30 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-101/topic/power-strategy-101-calibrating-adapting/:

1. But Graziosi disempower himself [disempowers]
2. Piss off the wrong people [Pisses]
3. Make you a lot of unnecessary enemies [Makes]