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Typos, Grammar, Syntax, & Content Improvement - Megathread
Enjoying the reading of Ultimate Power V.4.1. Found some typos on page 36.
Those issues were rarely presented in terms of “natural changes with cyclical
expansions and contractions” (desertification), or in terms of “what we can do
about it” (population increase) or, God forbit, in terms of “opportunities they also
present” (oil depletion to be tacked by renewable energies and entrepreneurial
ventures).
Those issues were rarely presented in terms of “natural changes with cyclical
expansions and contractions” (desertification), or in terms of “what we can do
about it” (population increase) or, God forbid, in terms of “opportunities they also
present” (oil depletion to be tackled by renewable energies and entrepreneurial
ventures).
If possible, it would be nice to give suggestions in a google docs or similar (maybe only with ability to making comments or possibility to add suggestions). As I'm reading through I could just give suggestions or comments wherever I am in the material. Would be easier compared to writing in a forum like this.
Why Mastering Microaggressions
Why Master Microaggressions
Sounds a bit better as a tittle
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/power-protecting/topic/how-to-save-face/:
- make it easier fro him [for]
- that all the rest of the websites has spoiled us [website]
- the feedback on a tiny section of TPM [is on]
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/power-protecting/topic/case-studies/:
- All paragraphs to be renumbered
- (a joke would have been OK if it wasn’t derisive but instead friendly… [missing closing )]
- See more on Power University. [to remove?]
- if they stoped for such [stopped]
- a power-aware person still knows what’s really up, and what’s up is that he wants [missing end of sentence]
- lowering his price become an act of magnanimity [becomes]
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/body-language-of-power-still-images/:
- remeber [remember]
- I really have no idea how Enrico is [who]
- Hand gestures can be used either: [either to:]
This might not be as much as value-taking as the direct assault, but it’s still damaging.
This might not be as value-taking as the direct assault, but it’s still damaging.
Miscalibrations Issues
Miscalibration Issues
But that’s a different issue to be addressed with assertiveness, and there is one lesson for that.
But that’s a different issue to be addressed with assertiveness, and there is a lesson for that.
Such, as you effectively become the aggressor.
As such, you effectively become the aggressor.
