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What's in it for them guys, WIIFT, never forget it!

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An email I hadn't even noticed because it went straight to my spam folder:

It seems I get some of these emails sometimes since I point my website visitors to PU.

So, if someone wants to list all of the WIIFT fails in this particular email, feel free :).

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Lucio BuffalmanoAlexandrKavalierBel

Bad all over.

  • "Can you provide me" tasks you = as if the ask wasn't already a task in itself, the "provide me" surface and thread expands that you should act on his task (for nothing)
  • "For free" thread expands on the taker's frame = as if the ask in itself wasn't bad in itself, the "for free" surfaces and thread-expands on the fact that he's being a scrounger looking for a free ride
  • "I can't afford it" doesn't add what he could afford = fair enough, but fails to provide a more relatable reason -a student, in a developing country, recently bankrupted... What?-, or say that he may be willing to offer at least something
  • "I would greatly appreciate it" fails to add something more concrete, such as "sharing it with friends", "writing a good review", etc. Plus, it sounds judgey (ie.: "do it, and you will gain my appreciation. Don't do it, and you won't get it")
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Ali ScarlettAlexandrJackKavalierBel
Have you read the forum guidelines for effective communication already?

Yep, and some nitpicks:

  • "Hey there": it would have taken little effort to find my name which makes this person come across like someone who "saw something cool and just wanted free stuff"
  • "Power University": a value-neutral subject line, so better would've been something value-giving, such as "I love your work!" (if they followed my work and feel that way)
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Lucio BuffalmanoAlexandrJackKavalierBel

Mind your reputation on reach-outs

Some of the issues with it:

  1. Personal email, which decreases authority
  2. Personal Twitter, which decreases authority
  3. Zero followers, which decreases authority
  4. Can't find a better contact than Twitter = little knowledge of the business

Plus:

  • He says nothing about this "opportunity", so now I'm supposed to get in touch and chase him for a big question mark? Much better would have been to mention what it's about
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Ali ScarlettAlexandrJohn FreemanJackBel
Have you read the forum guidelines for effective communication already?

Very vague indeed.

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