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gbe on November 20, 2020, 11:43 pm
At this address: https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/quizzes/frame-control/what-frame-is-jordan-peterson-using/
Frame spinning is not used anymore in the course, you should rename it.
At this address: https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/quizzes/frame-control/what-frame-is-jordan-peterson-using/
Frame spinning is not used anymore in the course, you should rename it.
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Stef on November 22, 2020, 10:14 am
If they are being cold and standoffish, it might be the case that they think that you are too low in warmth, so try to be warmer because you consider them as enemies.
You mean friends/ potential friends?
If they are being cold and standoffish, it might be the case that they think that you are too low in warmth, so try to be warmer because you consider them as enemies.
You mean friends/ potential friends?
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Stef on November 22, 2020, 10:36 am
This way you the pleasantry right back, meet him at his level, and then keep going while holding to your host role
Something is missing
This way you the pleasantry right back, meet him at his level, and then keep going while holding to your host role
Something is missing
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Stef on November 25, 2020, 4:06 am
Yet few would argue that mothers do care about their children
Do not?
Yet few would argue that mothers do care about their children
Do not?
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Stef on November 25, 2020, 4:06 am
Yet few would argue that mothers do care about their children
Do not?
Hmm not sure this is wrong.
"Mothers do care about their children, and few with argue with that notion", that's the meaning it seeks to convey.
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Stef on November 25, 2020, 4:06 am
Yet few would argue that mothers do care about their children
Do not?
Hmm not sure this is wrong.
"Mothers do care about their children, and few with argue with that notion", that's the meaning it seeks to convey.
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Stef on November 27, 2020, 6:02 am
What happens is that you can argue in favor or against something, the new way you put it make it easier to understand.
I suggest: yet few would argue against the notion that mothers do care about their offpring...
What happens is that you can argue in favor or against something, the new way you put it make it easier to understand.
I suggest: yet few would argue against the notion that mothers do care about their offpring...
Thank you Stef, I like your suggestion a lot. I will use it as soon as I get into re-working on that lesson/post.
Thank you Stef, I like your suggestion a lot. I will use it as soon as I get into re-working on that lesson/post.
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Finally caught up with all the typos fixing.
Thank you so much guys!
@aliscarlett, that system was very useful, but I don't know how easy it is for you.
So if it's difficult, I feel bad to have you go through it :), so feel free to skip it.
@bucktickrammstein18 man, that was some awesome stuff.
I got sidetracked and spent 15 minutes reading about "Mr. hand" there, but I fixed everything, and there was too much gold to reply to everything.
But I have made a note on "Sprezzatura" I'll probably using that as a name and credit you (but need to standardize it across all website, so will do later).
Finally caught up with all the typos fixing.
Thank you so much guys!
@aliscarlett, that system was very useful, but I don't know how easy it is for you.
So if it's difficult, I feel bad to have you go through it :), so feel free to skip it.
@bucktickrammstein18 man, that was some awesome stuff.
I got sidetracked and spent 15 minutes reading about "Mr. hand" there, but I fixed everything, and there was too much gold to reply to everything.
But I have made a note on "Sprezzatura" I'll probably using that as a name and credit you (but need to standardize it across all website, so will do later).
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