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Typos, Grammar, Syntax, & Content Improvement - Megathread

Hi Lucio,

small things I noticed while going through Power University:

1. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/power-university-welcome-lesson/ , par. 2 "Leverage Quizzes...": the word "When" is repeated: "We learn the most when: 1. When we are forced to think ... 2. When we go from concrete ...";

2. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-value-socialization/topic/social-exchanges-i-the-economics-of-social-success/ , under "Social Exchange Laws: The Basics", par. 4: "Everyone wants to associate with high-value folk.s";

3. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/power-101/ , there is no "Mark Complete" button; same at https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-power-dynamics-101/ and at https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/power-101/topic/the-fundamental-life-strategies-of-power/

4. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/assertiveness/topic/aggressive-pros-cons-strategies/ , under "An Example From Our Ape Cousins": "This example is actually based on real events in a chimp colony. T
he alpha was more dominant"

5. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/assertiveness/topic/how-to-be-assertive/, under "DESOE examples": "Without copying the script word for word, this is the DESOE::"

6. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/assertiveness/topic/assertiveness-strategy-power-machiavellianism-advanced/, the youtube video of "uncle Ben in How I Met Your Mother" is dead

7. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-skills-advanced/topic/first-impressions-how-to-ace-introductions/, under How People Assess Others: "Brad Pitt he mixes warm words..."

8. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-skills-advanced/topic/first-impressions-how-to-ace-introductions/, under "5. Givers & Takers Power Dynamics": "With that frame, just st by listening to you they’re doing you a favor"

9. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-skills-advanced/topic/micro-aggressions-social-calibration/, under "Why We Consider Them Together": "`Addressing them separately adds unneeded complexity and leads to analysis-paralysis"

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Lucio Buffalmano

Golden stuff, thank you so much, Bel!!

Edit:
Fixed the video as a first thing as it's most urgent.

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Other small things:

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Awesome, thank you so much Bel!

For now I fixed the assignment download first as that was the highest priority.

And the typos are on my list as soon as SU is launched.

Thank you so much!

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