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#281 · November 16, 2021, 1:49 pm

Golden stuff, thank you so much, Bel!!

Edit:
Fixed the video as a first thing as it's most urgent.

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#282 · November 25, 2021, 2:27 am

Other small things:

at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-skills-advanced/topic/covert-power-moves-how-to-handle-them/, under Intro: Disempowering Yes, Deliberate Maybe: "And, as usual, the area grey areas"
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-skills-advanced/topic/covert-power-moves-how-to-handle-them/ : “8. Ecouragements (Ie.: “You Can Do It”)”, and under it: “They are in a position to provide encouragement: sub-communicaes they’re either at your level or above you”, and also “nad like I probably was afraid”
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/bonuses-ebooks-earn/topic/assignments/, first assignment “Module 1: overview” at https://thepowermoves.com/wp-content/uploads/Module-1-Assignment.pdf is not reachable

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#283 · November 25, 2021, 3:01 am

Awesome, thank you so much Bel!

For now I fixed the assignment download first as that was the highest priority.

And the typos are on my list as soon as SU is launched.

Thank you so much!

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#284 · December 12, 2021, 12:38 am

Quote from B on December 12, 2021, 12:38 am
Hi Lucio:
1. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/manipulation/topic/techniques-strategies/, under 11. Socio-Cultural Manipulation, “Political framing: each party seeks to frame the public discourse in a way that benefits them. For example, when expressions such as “tax relief” or “pro-life” becom common parlance”
2. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/manipulation/topic/self-defense-counter-attacks/, “Relationships between equals do not exist: it’s either one wins, or lose.”
3. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/body-language-of-power-still-images/:
a) under Locking In: “And if you are sitting inside in a diner or small couch, you take the spot the inside spot”;
b) under 9. Walk With Purpose: i) “This can also help socially fearful individuals, since it can combat the fear of othes with imaginary weaponry”; ii) “If you are reading here, chances are that you part of a professional, urban, or generally driven and well-learned crowd”;
c) under 11. Be The Center of Attention: “People indeed don’t usually like to be around -and be influenced- by people who operate too far outside of their genders (“gender deviant”,). "[, in parenthesis]”;
d) under 1. Fake Smiles -Especially no fake toothy smiles-, “You know as they say, to tell conving lies, believe they’re true.”
4. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/power-signals-how-power-looks-like/:
a) under #2. Host Leadership, “The “host” is the organizer, the owner of the place, or the individual with the logistical know-how to shows others around”;
b) under 2.2. Show The Way / Make Them Follow Your Lead, “If you are around the same power and you are not the host, take it easy with too obvious “I’m showing you the way games. [missing closing “];
c) under #5. Judging, “The scene between Scarface and Sosa is a dramatic example of Scarface rejecting Sosa’s judge powers”: the youtube video of the scene at https://youtu.be/B_YXmw6r7_4?t=136 is dead;
5. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/power-words-how-power-sounds-speaks/:
a) under #1. Leading: “Speaker(who speaks and for how long)” (missing space between words and parenthesis);
b) under 1.3. Controlling The Frame: “Social justice warriors and virtue signalers align themselves with the dominant social frame to virtue signal and morally beat down the dissenting individual. They are piggy-backing (“power borrowing”) from cultural ” [missing end of sentence];
c) under 1.4 Controlling the Scope: “Socially powerful individuals define what’s the scope of the conversation (goals, and limits)” [missing . at the end]; and “If others go off-topic he will assertively bring the conversation back where it belongs -or where he thinks it belongs-:” [mismatch between subject of first sentence (individuals) and subject of second sentence (a single individual)];
d) under 1.5: “If someone is too nervous, or negative, or if the dominant prefers a different mood, he will take action to facilitates that change” [missing . at the end];
e) under 1.6: “Dominant individuals don’t get nervous because: 1. They don’t feel any obligation to reply 2. They consider themselves high-value, so feel no pressure of aving to “win” access to any particular individula’s value”;
f) under 2.2. Defend Right of Speech: “A great of assertively defending your right of speech is by comparing your pro-social behavior to theirs” [missing word “way”], and “Then your stance -polite, rational, and knowledgeable- will naturally recruit many observe on your side while naturally.”

Hi Lucio:

1. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/manipulation/topic/techniques-strategies/, under 11. Socio-Cultural Manipulation, “Political framing: each party seeks to frame the public discourse in a way that benefits them. For example, when expressions such as “tax relief” or “pro-life” becom common parlance”

2. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/manipulation/topic/self-defense-counter-attacks/, “Relationships between equals do not exist: it’s either one wins, or lose.”

3. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/body-language-of-power-still-images/:

a) under Locking In: “And if you are sitting inside in a diner or small couch, you take the spot the inside spot”;

b) under 9. Walk With Purpose: i) “This can also help socially fearful individuals, since it can combat the fear of othes with imaginary weaponry”; ii) “If you are reading here, chances are that you part of a professional, urban, or generally driven and well-learned crowd”;

c) under 11. Be The Center of Attention: “People indeed don’t usually like to be around -and be influenced- by people who operate too far outside of their genders (“gender deviant”,). "[, in parenthesis]”;

d) under 1. Fake Smiles -Especially no fake toothy smiles-, “You know as they say, to tell conving lies, believe they’re true.”

4. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/power-signals-how-power-looks-like/:

a) under #2. Host Leadership, “The “host” is the organizer, the owner of the place, or the individual with the logistical know-how to shows others around”;

b) under 2.2. Show The Way / Make Them Follow Your Lead, “If you are around the same power and you are not the host, take it easy with too obvious “I’m showing you the way games. [missing closing “];

c) under #5. Judging, “The scene between Scarface and Sosa is a dramatic example of Scarface rejecting Sosa’s judge powers”: the youtube video of the scene at https://youtu.be/B_YXmw6r7_4?t=136 is dead;

5. at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/power-words-how-power-sounds-speaks/:

a) under #1. Leading: “Speaker(who speaks and for how long)” (missing space between words and parenthesis);

b) under 1.3. Controlling The Frame: “Social justice warriors and virtue signalers align themselves with the dominant social frame to virtue signal and morally beat down the dissenting individual. They are piggy-backing (“power borrowing”) from cultural ” [missing end of sentence];

c) under 1.4 Controlling the Scope: “Socially powerful individuals define what’s the scope of the conversation (goals, and limits)” [missing . at the end]; and “If others go off-topic he will assertively bring the conversation back where it belongs -or where he thinks it belongs-:” [mismatch between subject of first sentence (individuals) and subject of second sentence (a single individual)];

d) under 1.5: “If someone is too nervous, or negative, or if the dominant prefers a different mood, he will take action to facilitates that change” [missing . at the end];

e) under 1.6: “Dominant individuals don’t get nervous because: 1. They don’t feel any obligation to reply 2. They consider themselves high-value, so feel no pressure of aving to “win” access to any particular individula’s value”;

f) under 2.2. Defend Right of Speech: “A great of assertively defending your right of speech is by comparing your pro-social behavior to theirs” [missing word “way”], and “Then your stance -polite, rational, and knowledgeable- will naturally recruit many observe on your side while naturally.”

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#285 · December 12, 2021, 4:24 am

Thank you so much Bel, super useful!

Fixed the video link right away and will get back to the typos, grammar and syntax as soon as I'm back updating PU.

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#286 · December 12, 2021, 5:47 am

From Seduction University Arbitration Strategy: Importing Brides (?)

Since we are on this note, do you mean arbitrage?

Arbitration is a legal, alternative dispute resolution process.

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#287 · December 12, 2021, 6:12 am

Thank you so much Matthew!

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#288 · December 28, 2021, 7:05 pm

Quote from B on December 28, 2021, 7:05 pm
Some more lawyerish nitpicking:
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/power-words-how-power-sounds-speaks/: a) under #3. Authority, the numbers of subparagraphs start with number 4 (e.g. “4.2. Judge Compliments”) instead of 3; b) under 4.2. Judge Compliments: ““He’ll do wel” ; c) under 4.6 Correcting Others: “They increase the authority and credibility of the correct-or, while decreasing the authority correct-ed.” [missing “of the”]; d) under 5.2: Well, here are some options which you can avoid the lower power position:” [instead of “by means of which” or “which can help you”]; e) under 5.3: “Here is another example from the Hedge of Tomorrow”: [instead of “Edge”]; f) there are two points “5.4”; g) under “#5. High ROI”, subparagraphs start with number 6 instead of 5; h) under “Handling Group Dynamics With Loudmouths”: Step in to defend someone the loumouth is making fun of (thi sis proper eagle behavior, the group will back you up and love you for that)” and “Move around developing good 1:1 converations: while the loudmouth spins his wheel trying to hold everyone’s attention and remainig shallow, you’re actualy starting deeper relationships. If you haven’t done so already, taget the person you’re interested in. Now you will approach as a high-value person”
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/styles-of-dominance-pick-yours/: a) under #4. Masters of The Universe: “Dimon said he would beat Trump because he is ” as smart and as tough as he is” [space between “ and “as”]; b) under “Aggressive Push-Pull”: “This technique is called “aggressive push-pull”. It consists of first delivering a boundary-breaking joke or a slightly one-up joke (push), and then reeling the target back in with a kinder word or gesture, or sometimes ismply by saying “I was joking””;
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/quizzes/case-study-aggressive-upstart-vs-established-leader/: “Right after the lesson on different dominant styles, it will be helpful to seem interacting in the same room” [instead of “see them”]
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/low-power-behavior/topic/low-power-words-stop-saying-this/: a) “2.3.2 Tail filler words” instead of “2.2.2 Tail filler words”; b) under 2.3.2. Tail filler words: “Notice that the same word “alright” after you have given a command or explained a procedure is very difference” [instead of “different”]; c) under 2.5 Over-reactions: “Raising her voice means she is not fully submitting. And she is trying to reject her brother’s authority and judge role. But getting so worked up also shows that she does care about what Michael says and thinks, that he is getting under his skin” [instead of “her”]; d) “2.6.2. Over-reactions 2” instead of “2.5.2. Over-reactions 2”; e) under 2.6. U-turning: “Social strategists will sometimes contradict a woman on purpose to check her reaction. And when they will verbal U-turning from her they know they are holding sway.” [missing “see” or “hear” or similar verb]; f) “2.8. Upward Inflection (Upskeak)” [instead of “Upspeak”]; and under it: “The very first moment, when she introduces her friend she goes up with the words “Danny” and “Becca”” [“Danny” instead of “Annie”]; g) under 2.10. Passive-aggressive attacks: “This is a pattern I have noticed and that I have not read anywhere else so, sane as “tail filler words”, it doesn’t have a standardized name. So here it is just for you, an exclusive from The Power Move :).”; h) under 3.4: “They said…”: “they said I could it” [missing “do”]; i) under 4.2 “Come on…”: “It’s people have no power to enforce resolutions and no courage to mount a serious challenge they resort to “come on-ing”” [missing “who”; and “they” instead of “that]; j) under #5. Child-Like Expressions: “As an examples”; k) under #6: “They either make you come across as lower status, or they are simply “off” and “wierd”, and ultimately… Also make you lose power.” [“wierd” instead of “weird”]; l) under 6.5. High-Pitched, Over-Excited: “Un-eagle-like, Out-of-place place excitemenet: he’s describing people crashing. Before screeching like a cheap hooker in a luxury store, he should make sure the drives are OK” [instead of “drivers”]

Some more lawyerish nitpicking:

at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/power-words-how-power-sounds-speaks/: a) under #3. Authority, the numbers of subparagraphs start with number 4 (e.g. “4.2. Judge Compliments”) instead of 3; b) under 4.2. Judge Compliments: ““He’ll do wel” ; c) under 4.6 Correcting Others: “They increase the authority and credibility of the correct-or, while decreasing the authority correct-ed.” [missing “of the”]; d) under 5.2: Well, here are some options which you can avoid the lower power position:” [instead of “by means of which” or “which can help you”]; e) under 5.3: “Here is another example from the Hedge of Tomorrow”: [instead of “Edge”]; f) there are two points “5.4”; g) under “#5. High ROI”, subparagraphs start with number 6 instead of 5; h) under “Handling Group Dynamics With Loudmouths”: Step in to defend someone the loumouth is making fun of (thi sis proper eagle behavior, the group will back you up and love you for that)” and “Move around developing good 1:1 converations: while the loudmouth spins his wheel trying to hold everyone’s attention and remainig shallow, you’re actualy starting deeper relationships. If you haven’t done so already, taget the person you’re interested in. Now you will approach as a high-value person”
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/topic/styles-of-dominance-pick-yours/: a) under #4. Masters of The Universe: “Dimon said he would beat Trump because he is ” as smart and as tough as he is” [space between “ and “as”]; b) under “Aggressive Push-Pull”: “This technique is called “aggressive push-pull”. It consists of first delivering a boundary-breaking joke or a slightly one-up joke (push), and then reeling the target back in with a kinder word or gesture, or sometimes ismply by saying “I was joking””;
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-power-behavior/quizzes/case-study-aggressive-upstart-vs-established-leader/: “Right after the lesson on different dominant styles, it will be helpful to seem interacting in the same room” [instead of “see them”]
at the page https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/low-power-behavior/topic/low-power-words-stop-saying-this/: a) “2.3.2 Tail filler words” instead of “2.2.2 Tail filler words”; b) under 2.3.2. Tail filler words: “Notice that the same word “alright” after you have given a command or explained a procedure is very difference” [instead of “different”]; c) under 2.5 Over-reactions: “Raising her voice means she is not fully submitting. And she is trying to reject her brother’s authority and judge role. But getting so worked up also shows that she does care about what Michael says and thinks, that he is getting under his skin” [instead of “her”]; d) “2.6.2. Over-reactions 2” instead of “2.5.2. Over-reactions 2”; e) under 2.6. U-turning: “Social strategists will sometimes contradict a woman on purpose to check her reaction. And when they will verbal U-turning from her they know they are holding sway.” [missing “see” or “hear” or similar verb]; f) “2.8. Upward Inflection (Upskeak)” [instead of “Upspeak”]; and under it: “The very first moment, when she introduces her friend she goes up with the words “Danny” and “Becca”” [“Danny” instead of “Annie”]; g) under 2.10. Passive-aggressive attacks: “This is a pattern I have noticed and that I have not read anywhere else so, sane as “tail filler words”, it doesn’t have a standardized name. So here it is just for you, an exclusive from The Power Move :).”; h) under 3.4: “They said…”: “they said I could it” [missing “do”]; i) under 4.2 “Come on…”: “It’s people have no power to enforce resolutions and no courage to mount a serious challenge they resort to “come on-ing”” [missing “who”; and “they” instead of “that]; j) under #5. Child-Like Expressions: “As an examples”; k) under #6: “They either make you come across as lower status, or they are simply “off” and “wierd”, and ultimately… Also make you lose power.” [“wierd” instead of “weird”]; l) under 6.5. High-Pitched, Over-Excited: “Un-eagle-like, Out-of-place place excitemenet: he’s describing people crashing. Before screeching like a cheap hooker in a luxury store, he should make sure the drives are OK” [instead of “drivers”]

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#289 · December 29, 2021, 5:52 am

Thank you so much, Bel!

Super useful and awesome to have PU lawyer-proof :).

I'll get to this as soon as I'm done completing and updating SU.

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#290 · January 5, 2022, 2:36 pm

Hi Lucio,

I have just purchased this course and loving it so far.

I have found that in the High Value Socialization module - Lesson 2 - Social Exchange II: Strategies, Techniques and Minsets, you have a duplicate #3 mindset / technique.

They are listed in the lesson as:

1: Switch to a WIIFT mindet

2: Keep some value undelivered, then ask

3: Leverage your future giving power

3: (again) Limit their losses (AKA Silver Medal Technique)

4: Protect their freedom and power (this also includes note 3.2 and another 4?)

5: Become a fair-value social marketer.

This obviously doesn't inhibit my learning in any way, I just figured it could be something you would want to know about. I only noticed because I've been talking a tonne of notes so far. Thanks again for the awesome course!

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