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Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on June 4, 2022, 3:28 pmBOOM!
Thank you, Bel, fixed now.
BOOM!
Thank you, Bel, fixed now.
Quote from B on June 4, 2022, 3:54 pmBTW this lesson was really helpful for me as a man, though it's nominally for women. Especially the part on receiving compliments for work results.
BTW this lesson was really helpful for me as a man, though it's nominally for women. Especially the part on receiving compliments for work results.
Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on June 4, 2022, 4:16 pmThank you for the note, Bel!
Yeah, I agree with you, there's plenty of wisdom in "lessons for women" also for men.
Of course the two genders aren't the same, but they do share lots of similarities.
Thank you for the note, Bel!
Yeah, I agree with you, there's plenty of wisdom in "lessons for women" also for men.
Of course the two genders aren't the same, but they do share lots of similarities.
Quote from B on June 20, 2022, 8:30 pm
- under 1: Competitiveness: “Dish it out: teasing and bantering is part of the “competition game” for men. And were in kind, and you’ll get their respect”
- under 1.2: “While women ten do to avoid competition,” [“tend”]
- under 3: “Over-worrying: worriors are seen as weak in the “winning-first mindset”” [“worriers”]
- under 5 More Advice, Use your budget: “Remember, you have been given a budge” [“budget”]
- under Power Moves to Keep You “Girly”: “Him: How dare you saying that, Alex is a great team player,” [“say”], and “It doesn’t even to be so obvious.” [“have to be”] and “When you feel the urge of wanting to retreat, that’s when you must have to press on.” [“must”]
- under 1: Competitiveness: “Dish it out: teasing and bantering is part of the “competition game” for men. And were in kind, and you’ll get their respect”
- under 1.2: “While women ten do to avoid competition,” [“tend”]
- under 3: “Over-worrying: worriors are seen as weak in the “winning-first mindset”” [“worriers”]
- under 5 More Advice, Use your budget: “Remember, you have been given a budge” [“budget”]
- under Power Moves to Keep You “Girly”: “Him: How dare you saying that, Alex is a great team player,” [“say”], and “It doesn’t even to be so obvious.” [“have to be”] and “When you feel the urge of wanting to retreat, that’s when you must have to press on.” [“must”]
Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on June 21, 2022, 7:56 amBOOM!
Thank you so much, Bel! fixed it now.
BOOM!
Thank you so much, Bel! fixed it now.
Quote from Ollie on August 8, 2022, 12:34 amTypo on https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/assertiveness/topic/passive-aggressive-pors-cons-strategies/
"Pors, Cons & Strategies" (pros) in the title and also in the url.
Great lesson and course btw, thank you.
"Pors, Cons & Strategies" (pros) in the title and also in the url.
Great lesson and course btw, thank you.
Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on August 8, 2022, 8:33 amAwesome, thank you so much, Ollie! Super useful!
Awesome, thank you so much, Ollie! Super useful!
Quote from B on September 16, 2022, 1:50 am
- paragraph #8 is #7 (and all subsequent numbers diminish by 1)
- under The Female Leader Curse: “(just as an example you can check the abundant finding of researchers…” [“findings”]
- under Female Leadership Curse: Likability: “Looking at the recent political elections also provide supporting evidence for the female leadership curse:” [“provides”]
- under Female Leadership Curse: Dating: “men are actually being rather rational in going for a more submissive woman who is more likely to stay with them and not cheat or leave him for another man.” [“them”]
- under #1: “And if we’re talking about good leadership, you should not to go after power for power’s take” [“not go” and “sake”]
- under #4: “But here is the catch: research shows that when women lead with a democratic style of leadership, then there is no social price to pay and no adverse effect on her likeability and social relationships.” [“their”]
- under #5: “ “ice queen” in her presence when in the presence of Tania” [repetition]; and “– Speak about hobbies and passion which are typically feminine” [“passions”]; and “– Tell stories of your cooking” [a space too much between these two words]
- under #8: “A gender-neutral style of leadership refrains from the mast masculine expressions of power…” [“most”] and “straddling the dangers” [?]
- under #11: “Pat Heim talks about Helene a VP and national president of her professional association.” [“Helene, a VP”] and “or that is going to stand firm on the issue and they are very welcome to lower their tone.” [“that she is going”]
- under #12: “If you did actually stop and thought of someone who speaks without any facial expression or body language movement, you likely felt he was “cold and distant”.” [“think”, “speaking”] and “Of course, you also don’t want to gesticulate or smiley too much” [“smile”]
- paragraph #8 is #7 (and all subsequent numbers diminish by 1)
- under The Female Leader Curse: “(just as an example you can check the abundant finding of researchers…” [“findings”]
- under Female Leadership Curse: Likability: “Looking at the recent political elections also provide supporting evidence for the female leadership curse:” [“provides”]
- under Female Leadership Curse: Dating: “men are actually being rather rational in going for a more submissive woman who is more likely to stay with them and not cheat or leave him for another man.” [“them”]
- under #1: “And if we’re talking about good leadership, you should not to go after power for power’s take” [“not go” and “sake”]
- under #4: “But here is the catch: research shows that when women lead with a democratic style of leadership, then there is no social price to pay and no adverse effect on her likeability and social relationships.” [“their”]
- under #5: “ “ice queen” in her presence when in the presence of Tania” [repetition]; and “– Speak about hobbies and passion which are typically feminine” [“passions”]; and “– Tell stories of your cooking” [a space too much between these two words]
- under #8: “A gender-neutral style of leadership refrains from the mast masculine expressions of power…” [“most”] and “straddling the dangers” [?]
- under #11: “Pat Heim talks about Helene a VP and national president of her professional association.” [“Helene, a VP”] and “or that is going to stand firm on the issue and they are very welcome to lower their tone.” [“that she is going”]
- under #12: “If you did actually stop and thought of someone who speaks without any facial expression or body language movement, you likely felt he was “cold and distant”.” [“think”, “speaking”] and “Of course, you also don’t want to gesticulate or smiley too much” [“smile”]
Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on September 17, 2022, 5:46 pmAwesome, thank you so much Bel!!
Fixed it now.
Awesome, thank you so much Bel!!
Fixed it now.
Quote from John Freeman on October 7, 2022, 10:04 pmHello Lucio,
the title of PU content update thread: "content" instead of "contet"
Cheers!
Hello Lucio,
the title of PU content update thread: "content" instead of "contet"
Cheers!
