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BOOM!

Thank you, Bel, fixed now.

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BTW this lesson was really helpful for me as a man, though it's nominally for women. Especially the part on receiving compliments for work results.

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Thank you for the note, Bel!

Yeah, I agree with you, there's plenty of wisdom in "lessons for women" also for men.

Of course the two genders aren't the same, but they do share lots of similarities.

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At https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/career-strategies-women/topic/learning-to-play-the-mens-game-i/:

  1. under 1: Competitiveness: “Dish it out: teasing and bantering is part of the “competition game” for men. And were in kind, and you’ll get their respect”
  2. under 1.2: “While women ten do to avoid competition,” [“tend”]
  3. under 3: “Over-worrying: worriors are seen as weak in the “winning-first mindset”” [“worriers”]
  4. under 5 More Advice, Use your budget: “Remember, you have been given a budge” [“budget”]
  5. under Power Moves to Keep You “Girly”: “Him: How dare you saying that, Alex is a great team player,” [“say”], and “It doesn’t even to be so obvious.” [“have to be”] and “When you feel the urge of wanting to retreat, that’s when you must have to press on.” [“must”]
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BOOM!

Thank you so much, Bel! fixed it now.

Community, new content and Confidence University now available here.

Typo on https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/assertiveness/topic/passive-aggressive-pors-cons-strategies/

"Pors, Cons & Strategies" (pros) in the title and also in the url.

Great lesson and course btw, thank you.

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Awesome, thank you so much, Ollie! Super useful!

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At https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/career-strategies-women/topic/female-leaders-a-guide-to-combine-power-femininity/

  1. paragraph #8 is #7 (and all subsequent numbers diminish by 1)
  2. under The Female Leader Curse: “(just as an example you can check the abundant finding of researchers…” [“findings”]
  3. under Female Leadership Curse: Likability: “Looking at the recent political elections also provide supporting evidence for the female leadership curse:” [“provides”]
  4. under Female Leadership Curse: Dating: “men are actually being rather rational in going for a more submissive woman who is more likely to stay with them and not cheat or leave him for another man.” [“them”]
  5. under #1: “And if we’re talking about good leadership, you should not to go after power for power’s take” [“not go” and “sake”]
  6. under #4: “But here is the catch: research shows that when women lead with a democratic style of leadership, then there is no social price to pay and no adverse effect on her likeability and social relationships.” [“their”]
  7. under #5: “ “ice queen” in her presence when in the presence of Tania” [repetition]; and “– Speak about hobbies and passion which are typically feminine” [“passions”]; and “– Tell stories of your  cooking” [a space too much between these two words]
  8. under #8: “A gender-neutral style of leadership refrains from the mast masculine expressions of power…” [“most”] and “straddling the dangers” [?]
  9. under #11: “Pat Heim talks about Helene a VP and national president of her professional association.” [“Helene, a VP”] and “or that is going to stand firm on the issue and they are very welcome to lower their tone.” [“that she is going”]
  10. under #12: “If you did actually stop and thought of someone who speaks without any facial expression or body language movement, you likely felt he was “cold and distant”.” [“think”, “speaking”] and “Of course, you also don’t want to gesticulate or smiley too much” [“smile”]
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Awesome, thank you so much Bel!!

Fixed it now.

Community, new content and Confidence University now available here.

Hello Lucio,

the title of PU content update thread: "content" instead of "contet"

Cheers!

 

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