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Error 1

High-Value Socialization

The graphic at the bottom of the page. 'Your' and 'value' are spelt incorrectly.

 

Error 2
https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/social-success-principles/

Graphic halfway down the page - 'everyone' spelt incorrectly

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BOOM!

Thank you so much Rogue!

Fixed one right away, and the other one I'm sending to the designer to be fixed ASAP.

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At https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/foundations-of-self-development/topic/foundational-steps-of-social-power/:

  1. Under 4.2: “2. Setting the rules of engagement: once a frame is set, it guides the relationship within the winner’s rules” [missing closing “.”]
  2. Under 4.3: “Successful people succeed because they keep track of who gives and takes, who empwers them, and who disempowers them” [“empowers”]
  3. Under 4.3: “They are strategic about their giving and taking, they know when someone is disempowering them, and they corrective actions (we’ll learn that in this course).” [“they take corrective actions”]
  4. Under 4.3.4: “Winners and social strategies don’t let others disempower them.” [“strategists”]
  5. Under 4.3.4: “When you let others disempower you, you lose social status and everyone’s respect (including your own)” [“missing closing “.”]
  6. Under 4.4: “10. Kindness / pleasant disposition (remember: that is a form of well as value and, often, it requires investment)” [“value as well”]
  7. Under 4.4: “then your investment is part of a virtuous cycle and quickly move towards collaborative and win-win” [“moves”]
  8. under 6.2: “When children rebels in their teens” [“rebel”]
  9. under 6.6: “And they don’t even much status or personality-based power” [“even have much”]
  10. Numbering of paragraphs starts from 4, should be 1
  11. Paragraph 4.3.4 should be 4.3.2 (and 1.3.2 after renumbering all above paragraphs)
  12. Paragraph 8.2 should be 7.2 (and 4.2 after renumeration of above paragraphs)
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BOOM, awesome, thank you so much Bel, fixed it now.

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Have you read the forum guidelines for effective communication already?

I understand now that the numbering of paragraphs is in sequence with the page immediately preceding that; what had led me to think that it was to restart was that the previous page also had a paragraph number 4.

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Quote from Bel on November 15, 2022, 10:54 am

I understand now that the numbering of paragraphs is in sequence with the page immediately preceding that; what had led me to think that it was to restart was that the previous page also had a paragraph number 4.

Yeah, exactly!

Wanted to make a note to share that as well, but there was a gap between me fixing the issues and writing that thank you note and I forgot.

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At https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-value-socialization/topic/social-exchanges-i-the-economics-of-social-success/:

  1. under High-Value People: A Profile: "Lots of people pleading for help send her poor CVs that only waste her time" [missing closing "."] and "She feels they only care about what she can do for them, without giving anything back" [missing closing "."]
  2. under Value Takers...: "I’m an honest person, don’t corner me into this BS where I feel obliged to say “yes” and put my reputation on the line" [missing closing "."] and "Value taker: “Please, please, please… " [space between three dots and "]
  3. under First Impressions: "And it’s the lower value person’s job is to make sure that he shows himself as a giver. Or, at least, not as a value-taker." ["job to"]

I know we're splitting the hair here btw!

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BOOM!

Thank you so much, Bel!

Any best-in-class course that wants to be "premium" needs not just premium content, but also premium and flawless presentation of the material, so the hair-splitting is most welcome and super useful.

Fixed it now, together with the infographics that Rogue mentioned earlier.

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At https://thepowermoves.com/courses/power-university/lessons/high-value-socialization/topic/strategies-techniques-mindsets-foundational/:

  1. under 1. Switch to...: "Be careful not to express the  WIIFT in a way that frames people as selfish". [a space too much between these words]
  2. under 2. Give some...: "Remember from the previous lesson the example of that girl whom I said “I’ll let you know ASAP”? ["girl to whom"] and "Its’ because I didn’t trust..." ["It's"]
  3. under 3.: "Your work is so helpful that I also share it with my friends" [missing closing "."]
  4. "I’m sure other readers would also love some offers like that ( <-  frames ... value-giving)" [missing closing "." both at end of sentence and at end of comment]
  5. "He might not share The Power Moves’ anymore." ["Moves"]
  6. "You haven’t given anything yet, but you can “pre-suade” them with your future value-giving powe" ["power"]
  7. "You give them value, your leverage increase, and they are incentivized..." ["increases"]
  8. under 6. Become a a “fair-value social marketer”: green infographics: "Aligns interests, gives, assess, asks, strategize" ["assesses" and "strategizes"]
  9. "When you’re here, you proactively sell and market your contribution to making sure they’re fairly valued and appreciated". ["make"]
  10. "However, if you plan of going place in life" ["places"]
  11. "After I linked to him, I showed it to him via text. and gave him 3 reasons why I added good value to his business." ["text, and"]
  12. "you must keep an eye if the relationship can ever truly be win-win with them". ["on whether"]

Now I think I get the "fair value marketing" part! I think I just couldn't when I started.

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Boom!

Thank you so much, Bel!

Fixed it now.

And about this:

Quote from Bel on November 23, 2022, 7:22 pm

Now I think I get the "fair value marketing" part! I think I just couldn't when I started.

Consider that I extended and improved that part.
And that was in large part thanks to you and our interactions on the forum, so really thank you for that.

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