Typos, Grammar, Syntax, & Content Improvement - Megathread

Quote from Bel on March 21, 2023, 1:18 am

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/seduction-university/lessons/overview-foundations-of-straight-line-seduction/topic/straight-line-seduction-intro/:

1. in general,y well, the more valuable traits
2. fails to connect, relate, or simply have a good time and make her feel like there is no “spark” [makes]

Quote from Bel on March 21, 2023, 1:22 am

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/seduction-university/lessons/overview-foundations-of-straight-line-seduction/topic/the-foundational-principles-of-dating/:

1. It’s how things evolve from imbalances is crucial. [that is]
2. This is something that many guys who recommend direct or super-direct approaches don’t get [sentence is repeated twice]
3. which indireclty says [indirectly]
4. men who make the first move and move things forward [make]
5. to do something for you or you or with you [or]
6. you would like meet her again [to meet]
7. obvious that ti’s romantic interest. [it's]
8. you’re power doesn’t go [your]

Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on March 21, 2023, 10:44 am

BOOM!!

Thank you so much, Bel, fixed it now.

Quote from Bel on March 31, 2023, 2:41 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/seduction-university/lessons/overview-foundations-of-straight-line-seduction/topic/the-5-power-levers-of-effective-dating/:

1. Let’s seen an example: [see]
2. Avoid showing far mor interest [more]
3. once you get engouh [enough]
4. qualifies herslef [herself]
5. I need to do is to turn [What I need]
6. You might underestimate the importance of warmth because they think like men.  [you]
7. if she seems scared, shy, or uncomofortable [uncomfortable]
8.  have you as an emeny [enemy]
9. High level of power imbalance turn win-lose [turns]
10. Become a high-value man woment want to invest in [women]

Quote from Bel on March 31, 2023, 2:45 pm

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/seduction-university/lessons/overview-foundations-of-straight-line-seduction/topic/common-mistakes-to-avoid/:

1. interested and compliese [complies]
2. And you’re still standing you’re endangering [And if you're]
3. The other issue with this approach is that many men are doing. [doing the same]
4. And that it makes a good match. [makes it]
5. make sure you also move thing forward [things]
6. which is aking to [akin]
7. a green light to move froward [forward]

Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on March 31, 2023, 4:12 pm

BOOM!

Thank you so much Bel!

Fixed it now.

Quote from Bel on April 2, 2023, 5:13 am

https://thepowermoves.com/courses/seduction-university/lessons/overview-foundations-of-straight-line-seduction/topic/how-to-straight-line-seduce/:

1. fool’s golden [gold]
2. She give empathizer statements [gives empathizing]
3. So it’s a good idea to start off social rather if you meet in events or social circles [rather social]
4. to date her of her sex with her [or]
5. higher smoothnes [smoothness]
6. Move things forward you’re both high power & high warmth [when you’re]
7. all that’s left to do is moving thing forward [things]

Quote from Lucio Buffalmano on April 2, 2023, 9:04 am

BOOM!

Thank you so much, Bel!

Fixed it now.

Quote from Ali Scarlett on April 7, 2023, 4:06 am

The article, "10 Mind Games Women Play (& How to Beat Them)," seems to only be showing "Mind Games Women Play" as the title on my side:

I tried editing it myself, but got hit with this error:

I think Lucio showed me how to deal with this before but I don't remember now.

So, since I'm heading to bed now, if it's not taken care of by the morning I'll try again.