Typos, Grammar, Syntax, & Content Improvement - Megathread
Thank you, Stef! Fixed.
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The video "Here is one example from the movie “L’Auberge Espagnole”:" in 8. The Power Dynamics of Joking & Teasing (& How to Deal With Them) is unavailable. So I couldn't understand what is a Bottom Feeder Racist Joke.
Same for "Scarface uses it in this scene:"
It feels like the title should be MALE domestication as the males are the ones being pussy whipped into submission ( by females)
how do you whip with a pussy is beyond me, maybe with long vulva labia or somethings, that makes the term more insulting as a dick is closer to a whip so getting dick whipped would be gay (and ok if you like it) yet pussy whipped is the ultimate symbolic humilliation as it involves a physical contradiction!
It feels like the title should be MALE domestication as the males are the ones being pussy whipped into submission ( by females)
how do you whip with a pussy is beyond me, maybe with long vulva labia or somethings, that makes the term more insulting as a dick is closer to a whip so getting dick whipped would be gay (and ok if you like it) yet pussy whipped is the ultimate symbolic humilliation as it involves a physical contradiction!
Final Observations & Exceptions
In the sexual market place, average women are worth far more than average men. And that gives men a strong power advantage.
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Thank you so much guys, fixed!
@gbe, the video from "L'auberge Espagnole" is still visible, it might be blocked on certain specific countries. But I added the dialogue that clarifies the social faux pas the video refers to.
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Experience entitlement. If you’re barely making ends meed the world doesn’t think you ... how to market a product.
the "know" is missing.
Thank you, Stef! Fixed it.
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The had of operations
head?
The night mind end with nothing happening, but the rumor mill starts anyway.
might/will?
Thank you so much, Stef, fixed!
"Rumor mill" is an idiomatic expression to describe the spreading of rumors and gossip.
By the way, one thing: when there is both a lesson PU and an article, go for the PU lesson, which is more in-depth and with more real-life examples.
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